Suggestions
Write a better story?
- RANK70
- 2020.11.11 17:16 (UTC+0)
- 102
the last good story you made is eulogy of a saint.
the rest is not that good.
the main story is just average.
heck do not even start with episode 2 , it was getting good, then
boom story got rushed in the middle where lilias made a stupid move that is out of character by leaving the city = _ =
wish episode 3 isn't filled with plot inconsistency and force plot.
i know it is not the priority, but at least try
the rest is not that good.
the main story is just average.
heck do not even start with episode 2 , it was getting good, then
boom story got rushed in the middle where lilias made a stupid move that is out of character by leaving the city = _ =
wish episode 3 isn't filled with plot inconsistency and force plot.
i know it is not the priority, but at least try
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